Friday, 7 September 2018

Keith Murdoch Moment in time

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  1. Anonymous1 November 2018 at 09:50

    Hello Sam I am Christopher a year 8 from Pompallier Catholic school kaitaia

    I liked how you spread out your writing in to paragraphs so its easy to read.

    I think you should add some colour.

    Please comment on my blog
    http://pcschristophert.blogspot.com/



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